It was nearing midnight, and though the moon shone full, it was still dark. Justin walked forward, tentatively,
following an old path in the woods. He had heard the legends. The hushed whispers
of the folk of the town he grew up in. That there was something that could give
him anything he had ever wanted. Something unnatural. He heard the
rumors: that you had to bring gifts – an offering of sorts. He had spent the
last week meticulously gathering what he needed: a yarrow flower, a cat’s paw,
human blood – your own blood.
The Crossroads
You’ll
find your dreams at a crossroads. It
was a phrase well recorded with the town. Every victim of an unsolved murder
within the last hundred years in his town had the phrase carved into one of their arms.
Granted, there weren’t many of them, but there were enough to make people wonder. The phrase repeated
in his mind over and over. He grew nervous.
Justin stopped. In front of him, the path split. A crossroads, he thought. He was there, though part of him hoped
he wasn’t. Anxiously he walked towards the middle. He pulled a small jar
out of his backpack. Justin hesitated. He considered again for the millionth
time if he actually wanted to go through with this. He did.
Justin pulled out a small gardening tool
and made a hole in the earth. He placed the jar into it and covered it back
over. Then, he waited. Justin stood up and peered into the forest. He half expected
someone to walk out of the trees and greet him. But, then again, he didn’t
really know what he expected. He didn’t even know if this would work.
“Poor timing, as per usual.” A voice
appeared behind him.
Justin froze. Slowly, he somehow
managed to muster the courage to turn to face the voice. In front of him was a
tall but slender man. He had dark hair, dark eyes, and was wearing a dark suit.
“I’m s-sorry, what?” Justin managed to stammer out.
“I was in the middle of a discussion on
the value of – ” the man cut himself off. “Well I suppose that doesn’t matter
now. Business is business.”
“Business?” Justin asked?
“You summoned me here, no?” The man now
questioning Justin.
“Y-yes.” Justin said, almost under his
breath.
“That means were here to do business. What
do you want?” The man asked.
“What do I want?” Justin responded
confused.
“You’re here because there is something
you want. Something you need. And I can give it to you…” The man smiled slyly.
“Anything I want?” Justin asked, now
interested.
“Anything.” The man replied.
“What’s the price?” Justin questioned.
“Whats the price?” The man spent a few moments laughing before settling down and icily staring into Justin. "Simple. Your soul."
Justin had to fight back the urge to
laugh. He didn’t believe in any god, and he hadn't since he was a child. He had
no problem handing over his soul because he didn’t believe they were real. But,
he considered for a moment: if this man really could give him anything, then maybe
he could actually take his soul.
Growing impatient, the man pressed him, “So,
what do you want?”
Justin paused for a moment, he knew what
he wanted. He had known what he wanted for a long time. “What I want is…” Justin
began with tears starting to well in his eyes, “What I want is for my wife to
be cured of cancer. I want her to be able to live the rest of her life without
that awful disease. I want her to live… please.”
“Hmmm…” The man paused. “I could give
you money, fame, women, men... I could give you power beyond your wildest
dreams, the power to make all bow before you... and yet you choose that?”
“I do.” Justin replied, regaining his composure.
“Such a selfless choice… and such wasted
potential.” The man scoffed. “But, if that is what you want, that is what you
will get.”
The man reached into his suit pocket and
pulled out a piece of paper and a pen.
“Sign this, and our little deal will be
official.” The man said.
Justin took the pen and paper from his
hand. He unfurled the paper. It was a contract. Justin took a few minutes to
read it. He found nothing that wasn’t already stated and hoped there wasn't anything that he missed. He signed it. As soon as
he had dotted the I in his name, he felt his arm start to burn. He dropped the
pen and the contract on the ground as he frantically pulled up his sleeve. On
his arm he saw words begin to spell themselves out as they were seemingly being burned into his skin. You’ll find
your dreams at a crossroads. Then, as soon as they had appeared, they
vanished.
“Just a reminder of our little
arrangement here.” The man said with a sly smile.
Justin looked up from staring at his arm
and the man was gone. Rattled, he made his way home. Within three days he was
able to bring his wife home from the hospital for the first time in over 5
months.
Author’s
Note
In the original story Indra asks Karna
for his armor so that he can give it to his son to protect him. Karna refuses
and demands something in return. Indra agrees and gives him a powerful weapon. I
replaced Indra with a man looking to help his wife and Karna with a crossroads
demon. Instead of a powerful weapon, I replaced the item that Indra gives with the
stereotypical object of desire for a crossroads demon.
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This was a great story, it reminded me of the setup to a Supernatural episode when I first read it. If you ever needed to make an edit to the story, a particular change I noticed would be to offer a trade at the end of the period and offer some sort of supernatural item in exchange for the soul back (to hearken back to the original story), although this is probably the result of watching too much Supernatural.
ReplyDeleteHey Chris. Crossroads demons are always awesome story objects. Your changes to the characters and the setting were very well articulated and the whole story flowed very smoothly. The bit with the inscriptions in the arms of the people was a very nice touch and added just the right amount of foreboding. I really enjoyed reading this one and hope you make more like it.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a great story. When I read the title, I thought the setting was going to be like the Crossroads restaurant at OU. The way you put a twist to the original story was very creative! There was so much suspense! I liked that you added some dialogue in your narrative. Your story was well written and made it easy to understand what was going on in the story. I kind of felt like I was in the story, watching everything as I read it. It sounded like it was painful to get his soul taken away. I'm glad he didn't die. I thought he was going to be killed after his soul got taken away. I'm curious about what happens now that he no longer has a soul. Is he basically a walking zombie? I look forward to reading more of your stories! Keep up the good work!
Hi Chris! I was already intrigued by your story as soon as I read the title. I also like how the first sentence of the story is highlighted in blue. The imagery that you use to describe the scene is very vivid and helps me imagine the scene perfectly. I also like the dialogue that you used which helps offer various sentence structures.
ReplyDeleteHey again Chris. I am an avid Supernatural watcher so this title just jumped out at me and sure enough crossroads demon! I thought that you did an awesome job of creating a great spin off story from the original, and of course me being a big Supernatural fan it fit what i love perfectly. Great job and keep up the great work for the second half of the semester!
ReplyDeleteHi, Chris!! Thanks for sharing your story with us. This is one of my favorite stories I’ve read so far!! There is substance and a story that is highly engaging. I am also a fan of your use of imagery and dialogue. This story absolutely leaves me wanting more and I hope you continue this dialogue in your next story! Thanks again. Jessie
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